Without a Paddle by Grey Lupous (PG-13)
Jun. 13th, 2010 11:34 am![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png)
Show: Stargate Atlantis
Rec Category: John Sheppard and Rodney McKay friendship
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Het/Slash/Gen: Gen
Warning/Spoilers: Per author, "A teensy bit of language, maybe? Unrepetant H/C?" | Spoilers up to 4x17 "Midway"
Author on LJ:
greyias
Author's Website: Shades of Grey
Link: Without a Paddle
Why this must be read:
Wordcount: 10,300
Summary: Rodney should have known that the mission was going to suck the moment he stepped through the Stargate, took in a deep breath of the fresh, clean mountain air — and swallowed a fly.
Another day, another mission gone horribly wrong. With Teyla on maternity leave, the rest of the team has been sent on a "routine" negotiation mission, though Rodney notes that three less likely negotiators would be hard to find. The story starts with John and Rodney on the run through the woods, separated from Ronon and (theoretically) making their way to the gate. Rodney ponders their predicament as they make their way through the woods ... but as if the mission weren't already bad enough, something else is very wrong, and Rodney must trust John to get them both out.
In her stories, Grey consistently paints Rodney and John as having a classic sibling-style relationship: They tease and mock one another mercilessly (though Grey doesn't descend into the cruelty that so many writers portray between them) ... but each knows without question that the other can absolutely be trusted. Humor is one of the trickiest types of writing to get right, but she makes it look effortless, offering line upon line that had me laughing out loud or remembering bits with a smile hours later — and every now and then, when you're distracted, she slips the knife right in. (Rodney's thoughts on the scheduling of medical appointments hurt.) Present-tense is not ordinarily my favored presentation style, but it works perfectly here. This is ultimately a meditation on friendship and absolute trust, using a classic hurt/comfort trope to bring the issue forward while always keeping sight of how these two guys actually communicate (or, ordinarily, don't).
( Excerpt )
Rec Category: John Sheppard and Rodney McKay friendship
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay
Het/Slash/Gen: Gen
Warning/Spoilers: Per author, "A teensy bit of language, maybe? Unrepetant H/C?" | Spoilers up to 4x17 "Midway"
Author on LJ:
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
Author's Website: Shades of Grey
Link: Without a Paddle
Why this must be read:
Wordcount: 10,300
Summary: Rodney should have known that the mission was going to suck the moment he stepped through the Stargate, took in a deep breath of the fresh, clean mountain air — and swallowed a fly.
Another day, another mission gone horribly wrong. With Teyla on maternity leave, the rest of the team has been sent on a "routine" negotiation mission, though Rodney notes that three less likely negotiators would be hard to find. The story starts with John and Rodney on the run through the woods, separated from Ronon and (theoretically) making their way to the gate. Rodney ponders their predicament as they make their way through the woods ... but as if the mission weren't already bad enough, something else is very wrong, and Rodney must trust John to get them both out.
In her stories, Grey consistently paints Rodney and John as having a classic sibling-style relationship: They tease and mock one another mercilessly (though Grey doesn't descend into the cruelty that so many writers portray between them) ... but each knows without question that the other can absolutely be trusted. Humor is one of the trickiest types of writing to get right, but she makes it look effortless, offering line upon line that had me laughing out loud or remembering bits with a smile hours later — and every now and then, when you're distracted, she slips the knife right in. (Rodney's thoughts on the scheduling of medical appointments hurt.) Present-tense is not ordinarily my favored presentation style, but it works perfectly here. This is ultimately a meditation on friendship and absolute trust, using a classic hurt/comfort trope to bring the issue forward while always keeping sight of how these two guys actually communicate (or, ordinarily, don't).
( Excerpt )