Best Laid Plans, by Emily (PG)
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Rec Category: Sha're
Pairing: Daniel/Sha're
Categories: Sha're, Vala, AU
Warnings: spoilers for Avalon
Author on LJ: 6beforelunch
Author's Website: Nomadic Spirit
Link: Best Laid Plans
Why This Must Be Read: This excellent short story gives us an intense confrontation between two very determined women: Sha're and Vala.
Vala is startled when a strangely-familiar woman marches into her holding cell and demands that she release Daniel from the bracelet she slapped on his wrist in Avalon. There's attack and counter-attack, with Sha're standing her ground and Vala calling her on Amaunet. And in the end, Vala is forced to concede that she can't win this particular battle.
Stellar characterization and superb voices: Best Laid Plans is a great read that will have you cheering for Sha're - and pleased that Vala will probably get her consolation prize in the form of Cameron Mitchell. :)
Vala sighs. "Look. Once I get what I came for, I'll go. Until then--"
"Until then you hold my Daniel hostage and keep him from a posting he has desired for years. Kema-fe sho'ra."
Oh, that's uncalled for.
"So when the took the parasite out of your head, was Daniel there?" Sha're starts, and Vala feels a small triumph at being able to rattle her. "You were the host to Apophis' queen. They were pulling the snake out of my head just as they were putting it in yours, but I remember that much. But when they took it back out, I'd guess that you had a husband and people who cared about you to go home to. I didn't. So don't you judge me."
Sha're stares at her for a long time before closing her eyes. "I will not speak to you of pain and who has suffered more. I have twice buried a husband--"
"In that case maybe Daniel's better off with me," Vala says, checking her stance just in case Sha're decides to try to slap her again.
But Sha're just gives her an unreadable look. "The husband I buried was Daniel."
Vala feels her eyes grow wide.
"You do not know what you play with," Sha're says, and Vala's beginning to think she might be right about that. "I will have no more pain for my Daniel or me. Do not harm him anymore than you have."
There's no "or else" at the end, but there really doesn't need to be.
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Date: 2008-03-02 04:21 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-03-02 05:48 pm (UTC)And yes! There's need to be more Sha're fic! I'm going to have to break my self-imposed one-author-per-category-per-month rule for our lovely lady, because there just isn't enough of it out there.
How about you finishing your AU fic...? :)
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Date: 2008-03-02 09:45 pm (UTC)And whoa. Someone remembers I wrote a Daniel/Sha're fic?? Alas, I got stuck on it. I didn't like the initial way it was playing out, and started to rewrite it... and naturally got stuck.
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Date: 2008-03-02 10:44 pm (UTC)You do know I've recced your stories, don't you? Let's see... There was this rec (http://community.livejournal.com/stargateficrec/553866.html). And this one (http://community.livejournal.com/stargateficrec/648397.html). And one of my absolute favorites (http://community.livejournal.com/stargateficrec/471246.html)!
Any chance you'll continue your Getting to Know You series...?
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Date: 2008-03-24 03:27 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-03-24 08:34 pm (UTC)Redbyrd has written wonderful Hammond POV, albeit not in first person - try her "1969 Prime." Aelfgyfu has written excellent Hammond fic, too: "Changing of the Guard."
And I'm always happy to sneak a little beta reading in... ;)
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Date: 2011-10-23 12:32 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-23 06:23 am (UTC)You'll find sixbeforelunch's fic over here (http://sixbeforelunch.dreamwidth.org/171594.html). And if you want more Sha're is Awesome fics (because YAY SHA'RE), I compiled a meta/recs post on Sha're back in February over here (http://gate-women.livejournal.com/77886.html).