Rain by Devra (NC-17)
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stargateficrecShow: Stargate SG-1
Rec Category: Daniel Jackson
Characters: Daniel Jackson, Sha're, Jack O'Neill
Pairing: Jack/Daniel, Daniel/Sha're
Het/Slash/Gen: Slash
Warning: some sex
Author on LJ: unknown
Author's Website: Devra's and JoaG's A & W Stargate Slash Fanfic
Link:Rain
Why this must be read:
This is a very touching fic about Daniel's search for a home. It follows Daniel in various stages in his life when it rained; throughout these stages, we get to see Daniel ride the rollercoaster of life as he strives to find somewhere or someone to belong with. What I really like about this fic are the emotions that gets stirred up and the vivid imagery. The reader gets taken from the contentment of a mother's lap to the bitterness of a broken relationshiip to the utter joy of finding love. Devra has a way with words that just pops the scenes from the fic straight onto my retinas. I feel like I'm watching a beautiful movie. An example of this is under the lj cut (I hope it works....). Just a beautiful and emotional journey for our favorite archeologist in his search for a home.
She was standing mere feet from Daniel, and his fear melded into embarrassment at his childish reaction when he had thought her gone. He shook his head and walked towards his wife. He was wet, muddy and the feeling of well being had all but left him. He wanted to be clean and dry, clad in a warm robe and an explanation as to why his wife would be meandering outside in this weather. Daniel was pissed and Sha’re was… absolutely, breathtakingly gorgeous. “Oh god,” Daniel whispered. Close enough to see her, the rain masking his approach, Sha’re was unaware that Daniel was standing nearby… unaware and totally uninhibited.
He loved her. It was as simple as that. Watching his wife as she gave herself over to the rain, appreciating what was a rare occurrence it was on Abydos, Daniel couldn’t believe how incredibly stupid he had been and how incredibly lucky he really was. He had been forever searching for that elusive something, keeping part of his heart in the past. Now, twenty some odd years later and light years from Earth, he was finally hit with the realization that home wasn’t a place, but a state of mind.
“I love you,” he whispered as his heart and cock swelled with the visuals of Sha’re standing under the onslaught of water, her dressing gown fitting her like a second skin, her dark curls straightened with the weight of the water that flowed over her tresses and down her back. She must have sensed his presence and she turned, her eyes alight with pleasure, a knowing grin on her face as she extended her hand in invitation. Daniel walked forward, his feet sinking in the drenched sand and like a nervous bridegroom he took her in his arms and kissed her upturned face. And in her kiss, Daniel felt a sense of peace that had always seemed unobtainable. He was loved, he loved, and he had finally found his way home.
Rec Category: Daniel Jackson
Characters: Daniel Jackson, Sha're, Jack O'Neill
Pairing: Jack/Daniel, Daniel/Sha're
Het/Slash/Gen: Slash
Warning: some sex
Author on LJ: unknown
Author's Website: Devra's and JoaG's A & W Stargate Slash Fanfic
Link:Rain
Why this must be read:
This is a very touching fic about Daniel's search for a home. It follows Daniel in various stages in his life when it rained; throughout these stages, we get to see Daniel ride the rollercoaster of life as he strives to find somewhere or someone to belong with. What I really like about this fic are the emotions that gets stirred up and the vivid imagery. The reader gets taken from the contentment of a mother's lap to the bitterness of a broken relationshiip to the utter joy of finding love. Devra has a way with words that just pops the scenes from the fic straight onto my retinas. I feel like I'm watching a beautiful movie. An example of this is under the lj cut (I hope it works....). Just a beautiful and emotional journey for our favorite archeologist in his search for a home.
She was standing mere feet from Daniel, and his fear melded into embarrassment at his childish reaction when he had thought her gone. He shook his head and walked towards his wife. He was wet, muddy and the feeling of well being had all but left him. He wanted to be clean and dry, clad in a warm robe and an explanation as to why his wife would be meandering outside in this weather. Daniel was pissed and Sha’re was… absolutely, breathtakingly gorgeous. “Oh god,” Daniel whispered. Close enough to see her, the rain masking his approach, Sha’re was unaware that Daniel was standing nearby… unaware and totally uninhibited.
He loved her. It was as simple as that. Watching his wife as she gave herself over to the rain, appreciating what was a rare occurrence it was on Abydos, Daniel couldn’t believe how incredibly stupid he had been and how incredibly lucky he really was. He had been forever searching for that elusive something, keeping part of his heart in the past. Now, twenty some odd years later and light years from Earth, he was finally hit with the realization that home wasn’t a place, but a state of mind.
“I love you,” he whispered as his heart and cock swelled with the visuals of Sha’re standing under the onslaught of water, her dressing gown fitting her like a second skin, her dark curls straightened with the weight of the water that flowed over her tresses and down her back. She must have sensed his presence and she turned, her eyes alight with pleasure, a knowing grin on her face as she extended her hand in invitation. Daniel walked forward, his feet sinking in the drenched sand and like a nervous bridegroom he took her in his arms and kissed her upturned face. And in her kiss, Daniel felt a sense of peace that had always seemed unobtainable. He was loved, he loved, and he had finally found his way home.
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