I don't do SGA, either, after they killed Beckett, I couldn't care anymore. But I was drawn in by Jack and pancakes. Loved Ronon quietly going shopping while scouting, Shepard and Teyla snuggled up together and Jack claiming to be the father. Funny, funny stuff. And I loved the little snatch you quoted above about Ronon wanting to hit Rodney, but admitting Shepard just usually does so himself. Nice little read.